I'm sorry, but could I have an extension of a day, if that's OK? I changed the story structure around and now it all feels like word salad. I'm off tomorrow so I will be able to finish it.
PS, I will post the draft in the meantime (under the AO3 name 'Sout') so that it's clear I've written something, as I see you've asked someone else to do so.
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